Maybe you should pick up a real guitar and realise that a guitar has more than four frets. : /
Otherwise, quite decent. But you could do better on the title + animations.
Dream Theater is quite awesome, glad you like them. I only hope you didn't get to know about them through guitarhero ;)
Same.. well.. something again.
So, I enjoyed the song! Though not your work. Havn't I seen the same thing before just without music? Oh, yes I did.
I must say
Your animations are pretty damn awesome though your voice acting isn't even good, so until next time practice your voice acting. ( I'd like the characters to seem like characters not you making a poor imitation of your characters )
Oh another one...
It's not badly made but man. This story has already been on a lot of other movies, It's just not fun anymore, so can you do us a favour and be creative next time?
Oh fucknipples, this has been done before? Curses and damn.
Very good first flash
This was some major awesomeness for your first flash :D, you even made me chuckle good job :) But in the future I hope the sprites are gone and that your movies are a bit longer :)
There are some mistakes you can learn from this.
- Do not make something like this flash, make a movie or at least make some cooler animations.
- When shooting trough the head, yeah it looks cool but why do you use the exact same bullet wound on both sides? It doesn't look good.
- The axe was pretty lame. I thought you were going to split him! But it's accepted in my book. But please do try harder next time.
Haha, very nice flash. I really like your humour , though when they are speaking Spanish that's just like any other Spanish drama serie, right? I've heard they are pretty messed up.
Anyway really good work cheers to you!
Thank you very much!
Voice acting and Animation
Well, you have managed to animate pretty good but It's hard to tell what the animations have to do with the story line. Also it's hard to tell the different characters apart from each other because they all sound the same, you could at least try to sound like different persons. The sound effects are nice, but what you could add is some background, plain white gets boring. But otherwise pretty nice, I bet you have potential of doing a much better flash movie.
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